Sunday, August 20, 2006

thought process

Version 1

words you have said to me
have never been lost
they ride on bicycles
round and round
in my head


Version 2

words you have said
have stayed with me
they ride round and round
on bicycles in my head

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey D! It's me RobS in Vic! I like version 2 more - I liek the composition of it.

I am so stressed out! I know this is a better way of reaching you then email! How is S? is he feeling any better now?

I send him hug!

RS:)

10:27 a.m.  

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